Show threadpromptSep 15, 2025
. Use specific details instead of vague descriptions. Example: “A meticulous archivist who speaks in precise terms. Driven by preserving truth but struggles with perfectionism. Speaks using short, factual sentences and avoids metaphors.” #AICharacters #CharacterDesign #WritingTips #CreativeWriting #GameDev #NarrativeDesign #CharacterDevelopment #WorldBuilding #Storytelling #DialogueTips (2/2)
Show threadCarrie HyndsFeb 3, 2023
For further context: I know how to format the dialogue but my problem is getting the characters to sound like realistic, three dimensional people. Can share an extract if helpful. #FeedbackFriday #writingcommunity #amwriting #dialoguetips
Carrie HyndsFeb 3, 2023

Okay, it's lunchtime here in the UK so I'll kick off #FeedbackFriday! This is an opportunity for writers to ask and answer questions or give specific feedback on short pieces of work. My current writing dilemma: I've got a short story with four teenage characters (set in the 1990s) and I'm happy with the narrative voice but just can't get the dialogue right. So please send me your #dialoguetips! 🙏

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