EoisMGreat Opening Lines – and Why! (Nov 2024’s Great Opening Lines) #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2024/11/30/great-opening-lines-and-why-nov-2024s-great-opening-lines/ #Critiquing #GreatOpeningLines #POV #Setting #StoryCrafting #Style #Tone
Why It Works for Me – Mark Hayes’ “The Strange and the Wonderful” #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2021/08/10/why-it-works-for-me-mark-hayes-the-strange-and-the-wonderful/ #BookStoryReviews #Critiquing #WhyItWorksforMe
Great Opening Lines – and Why! (May 2022’s Great Opening Lines) #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2022/05/30/great-opening-lines-and-why-may-2022s-great-opening-lines/ #Critiquing #GreatOpeningLines
An Experiment in Writing – Part 57: More on Character Voice (Showing Change through Tone, Language, Behavior) #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2025/11/12/an-experiment-in-writing-part-57-more-on-character-voice-showing-change-through-tone-language-behavior/ #Characters #Critiquing #ExperimentsinWriting #ForAuthors #StoryCrafting #Tone
Why It Works for Me – Cherylynn Dyess’s “The Soul Maker” #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2020/06/16/why-it-works-for-me-cherylynn-dyesss-the-soul-maker/ #Critiquing #WhyItWorksforMe
An Experiment in Writing – Part 70: Edit Someone Else’s Work to Improve Your Own #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2026/02/11/an-experiment-in-writing-part-70-edit-someone-elses-work-to-improve-your-own/ #Critiquing #ForAuthors #StoryCrafting #StoryTelling
Great Opening Lines – and Why! (Oct 2021’s Great Opening Lines) #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2021/10/31/great-opening-lines-and-why-oct-2021s-great-opening-lines/ #Atmosphere #Characters #Critiquing #GreatOpeningLines #Mood #Setting #StoryCrafting #Tone
An Experiment in Writing – Part 64: Recognizing My Worth #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2025/12/31/an-experiment-in-writing-part-64-recognizing-my-worth/ #Critiquing #Editing #ExperimentsinWriting #ForAuthors #Revision #StoryCrafting #StoryTelling
An Experiment in Writing – Part 63: Recovery TripTych (eating more of my own dogfood) #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2025/12/24/an-experiment-in-writing-part-63-recovery-triptych-eating-more-of-my-own-dogfood/ #Atmosphere #Characters #Critiquing #Dialogue #Editing #ExperimentsinWriting #ForAuthors #Mood #Plot #POV #Revision #Setting #StoryCrafting #StoryTelling #Style #Tone #WorksInProgress
Why It Works for Me – Loren Eiseley’s “The Fifth Planet” #togetherwerise https://josephcarrabis.com/2020/05/12/why-it-works-for-me-loren-eiseleys-the-fifth-planet/ #Critiquing #WhyItWorksforMe