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ONE chapter left to edit in Book-5.

The editing project begun on January 1st draws to a close. My methods are tedious, but only cost me time, which I have (until I don’t, of course).

Too, done isn’t exactly Done. I will next perform a targeted edit on the novella, Trellis House, which is much shorter.

That, though, is later. First, there’s anticipating the end, and finishing.

Be everwell.

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TWO chapters left to edit in Book-5.

A chapter was completed because I planned ahead…

The march is done (for now).

It was an experience that will influence me in the future. When we experience life we value it more, and are more willing to fight for it.

As Riparia notes in Book-1, you can’t replace the past, you have to build a better tomorrow, and that requires vision.

Be everwell.

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THREE chapters left to edit in Book-5.

I’m close, but will lose a block of time today at the No Kings march downtown.

To aid my writing self, I made certain I’d have a fairly short chapter to work on tomorrow, and then got a head start on it last night.

Even if I fall behind today, that’s okay. Democracy comes first. If it didn’t for all of us, there would’t be a democracy.

Be everwell.

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Four chapters left to edit in Book-5.

Thank goodness for reading a book on the side while I’m performing a targeted edit.

Here’s the thing about targeted editing. You jump randomly around chapters. I may know the story, but there’s no sense of advancement because that’s the idea.

It’s great for focusing, but you never feel like a reader. You want that, but it can wear on you.

Be everwell.

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FIVE chapters left to edit in Book-5.

It’s crazy, but I began worldbuilding Carrdia and writing its first story simultaneously, including realizing I needed at least a preliminary map.

I grabbed a scrap sheet of paper, flipped it over, and went wild sketching. At least 85% of that map endured.

What would’ve happened to my stories, I wonder, if I’d sketched a different map?

Be everwell.

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7 chapters left to edit in Book-5!

I miss mapmaking and have been reviewing old ones. The original Tremjara map is from 2002 (created in Paint). Dimensions: 754 x 531 pixels.

The 2020 Tremjara map’s dimensions: 4800 x 3200 pixels.

If you zoom in on the old map it blurs immediately. That land maze in the NW? Scrapped in 2003. The color palette was severely limited.

Be everwell.

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EIGHT chapters left to edit in Book-5!

I was the teen who never revised in school, though, in those days I had to rewrite papers by hand. I detested doing that, so I endured the red ink.

Now, I have to guard against over-editing, placing word efficiency ahead of readability. It’s the battle between my practical and creative sides.

It’s my practical side that plans and organizes.

Be everwell.

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NINE chapters left to edit in Book-5!

After, there’s a novella to edit. They’ll be published together after Book-4.

Why? The novella, Trellis House, serves as a bridge between Books 4 and 6. Confused yet?

On the timeline, Book-5 occurs simultaneously with Book-2, but would spoil Book-4 if published sooner. So, the series steps back, then moves ahead with the novella.

Be everwell.

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TEN chapters left to edit in Book-5!

To reach that number, yet again, I finished while having supper because I lost the morning to hiking.

Normally, I’d sacrifice a day here and there, but with Book-5 it’s become “a thing” because I went so long without missing a day. Now I’m obsessed with seeing if I can make it.

Someone needs to slap me if I become obsessed with this again.

Be everwell.

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This rediscovered hybrid map has me reliving my 2017 Tremjara painting project when I also made changes as I went.

While painting the west, I’d glance at the east, an idea forming that became Pannulus.

It’s missing here.

Well, part of one island is there. Two years before, I’d written short stories for an unknown location. That location became the archipelago of Pannulus.

Be everwell.

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