Started reading #TheBlackTidesOfHeaven by #JYYang (or #NeonYang), and while it's got some good opening descriptions it's also showing signs of being overwritten. Quick, the author's workshop buddies need to go back in time to tell them four metaphors in one paragraph just to describe scenery are too much.
Hey how about something more in the vein of why I joined this instance:
The #Tensorate series by #JYYang is incredibly good and you should read it.