RE: https://c.im/@NaClKnight/115636977120811185
#EroticMusings 28: With erotic works, do you begin with the end in sight, or discover the finished work as you go? What tools or processes to you use to help you plan ahead, or to guide you as you create?
Oh heavens no.
So far my best writing has come from having an idea, writing it, and then spending a little time considering why it sucks.
Then an interminable period in between,
Then I write the good version of that idea.
#BeatPreyLove was originally a much worse, less internally consistent, less sexy, less enjoyable story. I wrote myself into a corner and abandoned it. And that was after abandoning it's original version, an even worse story named Feinting Spells.
The shorter the story, the faster all this happens. But I need to attempt it, get stuck, get frustrated, and then return, to end up with something I'm happy with.
For planning ahead? My tool is simple:
write the plot in as few words as possible. No. Fewer. No. Even fewer.
If the action of the scene, the bare bones "these people do this, then this happens, then they do this, then this happens," isn't clear to me, I can only fuck up the story the ensues.
So write it as simply as possible, then start adding major events and then crucial details, and suddenly I have a story, or a fight, or a sex scene, that I like (more)